---
description: Remove AI tone from article and save revised version
argument-hint: <file_path>
allowed-tools: Read, Write, Glob
context: fork
model: sonnet
---

# De-AI Article Reviser

Remove artificial AI tone from articles using the project's established revision standards.

## Step 1: Parse Input

Input file path: $ARGUMENTS

If no path provided, ask the user to provide a file path.

## Step 2: Read Reference Guides

Read these two files from the project root for revision standards:
- `POWELL_REVISE.md` — the primary de-AI revision guide (principles, AI trace checklist, revision operations, vocabulary blacklist/whitelist)
- `writing_style.md` — the user's authentic writing style DNA

These two files are the **sole authority** on what counts as AI tone and how to fix it. Do NOT use your own generic rules — follow these guides strictly.

## Step 3: Read Original Article

Read the file content using the Read tool with the provided path.

## Step 4: Analyze and Revise

Apply `POWELL_REVISE.md` in this order:

1. **Section 零 (十大写作原则)**: Check each principle — problem-driven opening, deletion priority, no recap, direct judgment, metaphor as last resort, hidden first-person, forced subjectivity, vocabulary reduction, audience baseline, no chicken soup.
2. **Section 一 (AI痕迹识别清单)**: Scan for and fix all listed AI traces — transition word piling, mechanical parallelism, over-balanced phrasing, defensive citations, empty modifiers, AI endings, self-Q&A, perfect three-part structure, grand vocabulary bombing.
3. **Section 二 (修订操作手册)**: Apply sentence-level rewrites — break parallelism, add colloquial tone, vary paragraph lengths, insert genuine thinking.
4. **Style alignment**: Cross-reference with `writing_style.md` to match the user's authentic voice — bilingual tech terms, conclusion-first, zero-fluff, max 1-2 metaphors.

**Preserve**:
- Original meaning and key information
- Technical terms and proper nouns
- Code blocks, lists, and structural formatting
- Original language (Chinese/English)

## Step 5: Generate Revised Filename

From the original file path, generate the revised filename:
- Extract directory, filename, and extension
- Add `-Revised` before the extension
- Example: `/path/to/article.md` → `/path/to/article-Revised.md`

## Step 6: Save Revised Version

Write the humanized content to the new file path.

## Step 7: Confirmation

Output a success message showing:
- Original file path
- Revised file path
- 3-5 specific changes made (reference which POWELL_REVISE rule was applied)

## Output Format

```
Article Revised - AI Tone Removed

Original: /path/to/article.md
Revised:  /path/to/article-Revised.md

Changes applied:
- [原则3 戛然而止] 删除了首尾呼应的结尾段
- [1.1 过渡词] 删除了"首先...其次...最后"结构
- [1.1 空洞修饰词] 将"破坏性是灾难级的"改为具体描述
- ...

Done.
```
